Friday, March 12, 2010

Would it come to be, what my moma did before me.
Would I do what she did, back when I was a kid.
Would I face my problem as a kid and become a man,
Or be on the streets kicking a can cuz I ran.
Should I leave my fam behind,
and erase them from my mind.
I would not be there for my sis or my bro when they cry,
It would kill me inside it would make me feel like I want to die.
But something inside me says I got to survive,
And do what I got to do to and strive.
People say I got to mature faster then another,
And except another lady that wants to become my mother.
And if I disappear,
My whole fam would have at least one tear.
And for me they would feel sympathy,
and I would put my self in their position I would feel empathy.


-JC

5 comments:

jessica said...

this poem was deep. good job i can relate in a way

ALEJANDRA said...

THIS POEM WAS REALLY DEEP GOOD JOB.

Robbie said...

a great poem... i like alot of the different phrases in there i can relate to 2 or three of them. and im sure other kids can relate to atleast one phrase... sweet poem

Andrea said...

Danq This Poem Was Deep I Like It.. .It Has Alot Of Meaninq To It.. .

Tim said...

Well JC families are difficult to deal with sometime and I think you don't have to kill yourself inside just to block it out. I think you should block it out by talking to your family and tell them how you feel.