Friday, March 12, 2010

I’m so desperate I search, trying to find myself I look,
I search and I search my heart is lost.
Who’s that I’m looking in the mirror? It’s me,
Its me I’m looking at, me that wont succeed,
I shake my head at what I made me,
I fight to not listen at the pain Iv created,
The pain I will always see
Trembling legs week arm, scars from defeat,
Who am I. What have I become?
My choices are what made me,
and I am what I want to be,
and I still have a chance to defeat me.


-Andrea

4 comments:

stefany said...

wow the way you put your poem made it seem like you where talking about me thats crazy

Robbie said...

i really can look at this poem and see who you are. im not gonna write it but i think everyone has beautiful aspects in them but a great poem

GUSATVO R. said...

YOU WOULD MAKE A GOOD POET ANDREA, YOUR POEMS ARE WAY DEEP.

Taylor aka maui said...

wow that was deep andrea. i look in the mirror and see what i have become.