Friday, March 12, 2010

A New World

A new world, a new life, and a fresh start
To begin there's one girl in my life.
Her eyes sometimes green sometimes blue
Put my mind in motion
But always deep like the ocean.
No one but her
I know will always be there.
And even though it's just the start
There will always be a place for you in my heart.


-Eddie

6 comments:

alejandra said...

this is a good poem eddie. good job its really cute.

Kesha said...

Aw, Eddie! This is the cutest poem ever! You have a way with words. I will write you a poem now! :) I like the words you used to rhyme very visual! I LOVE YOU! Ha ha.

Robbie said...

could get the image of the girl and the relation ship of the girl i like thiss poem... its from the inside and its sincere good job

GUSATVO R. said...

now thats what i call having feelings for someone

Casey said...

Great poem. I like your style of writing.

Maryssa said...

Eddie, that is so cute! I'm sure Kesha feels the same for you, or pretty close. It's amazing that you pay attention to her eye color and cherish her like you do. Great poem.