Friday, March 12, 2010

Hate

Hate

Hate is people that are jealous
Maybe because there full of money
Money does not even matter on how people look at you.
Too many rules to follow
They are always making you take the long way.
Always testing you on the way
They make you think of time
The sun beading down on you
Getting a heat stroke
Always getting sun burns following that road


-Sommer

4 comments:

ALEJANDRA said...

THIS IS A REALLY GOOD POEM GOOD JOB SOMMER :)

taylor said...

i really like this poem it realy describes how i think about people

eddie said...

good job summer, and that is true about hate.

Robbie said...

I like the powerfulness of this poem. My favorite line is the sun beating down on you. Its just good and powerful to get the feeling of the but by a person.