Persuasive: Final Draft

Instead of taking all that space up with cds, tapes you can put it all on one device. It holds music and photos. Also you can play games on it.

I pods do not take up as much space as cds do. I pods also do not take up as much space as other electronics do.you do not have to deal with switching cds. You can just use the buttons on your I pod.

Also you do not have to deal with cd jams. Also you do not have to worry if the song will play, because of a cd scratch. It plays when you push play. It does break easy either.

You also do not have to waste time taking a cd out and putting another cd in. All you have to do is use the buttons to change the songs. Another good thing about the I pod is that you can play games on it. So you do not have to go somewhere else to play games.

You should buy an I pod because it takes up less space. It also holds a lot of music. Instead of taking your camera somewhere to show someone your pictures, take your I pod and on the way listen to your music.


Jordan

Narrative: Final Paper

I have been living in Hawaii for 8 years. We live in a good-sized house. My family lives pretty close to the beach. I am 8 years old and I am in second grade. My parents both have jobs. I like Hawaii so much I would never of thought of leaving it. But now I see things missing everyday, and I see a lot of full and empty boxes.

The next day my parents told me that we were moving. I was really mad at my parents that day. They told me to start packing my stuff so the moving truck can take it. So I went to my room and packed. I then put it in the moving truck.

We went to the airport the next day. Before that, I said good-bye to my friends. I got on the airplane and went on the long ride. I arrived in Salt Lake City about 3or 4 hours later. It was snowing when I got here.

I then got into school late November. It was kind of weird having to go to a new school. Also making new friends was even harder. I did not like
Utah at first because it was so cold. I always wanted it to be summer. Cause that is what I was used to.

I learned that going to new places is not that bad. I changed my thinking on moving. Since then I have moved twice, and been fine with it. It is not so bad moving, and doing new stuff. It makes things better to learn new stuff.


Jordan

Narrative Paper: Introduction

I have been living in Hawaii for 8 years. We live in a good-sized house. My family lives pretty close to the beach. I am 8 years old and I am in second grade. My parents both have jobs. I like Hawaii so much I would never of thought of leaving it. But now I see things missing everyday, and I see a lot of full and empty boxes.

Jordan

I am from Provo there is a good side of town and a bad side. The good side is the north part of it. That is were all the rich people and the people that are retired go to. The bad side is south Provo it goes a little bit north to by Orem. That side is where all the gangs and poor people live. I have gotten even with a lot of people.
There were people at my school that I did not like and I would get into fights with the people I did not like or the people that hated me. There was this one time I got into a fight with a kid and he picked up a brick and hit me in the back of the head with it. The next day I saw him at school and I pulled out brass knuckles and hit him in the jaw. I think I broke it because I heard a loud snap. My family does not really worry about money because both of my parents work a full time job. Both of those jobs pay pretty good, because of that my life is pretty good

Jordan (JJ)