Persuasive: Final Draft

Coke Cola is good but if you want less sugar and less calories then try Diet Coke. It has the same taste and is healthier for you. No more worrying about getting kidney stones or any other kind of health problems. Keep reading and you’ll see how good Diet Coke is and how cheap it is. So grab a Diet Coke relax and still enjoy the original taste of Coke Cola.

Diet Coke is good because it is healthier and keeps you blood sugar down. For people that are diabetic that like the taste of Coke but can’t have it because of the high sugar. Then buy a Diet Coke. It has low sugar low caffeine. Its less chances of getting kidney stones and or cancer. It doesn’t give you a sugar rush then later a stomach ach. It still has the original taste as the original one.

It is not hard to find. You can purchase it any where. Coke product is everywhere. It is at a good price. They come in two litters, 20 oz, and many more different sizes. It is all less than 2 dollars. They also have prizes you can win. If you buy a coke, look under the cap and you might win some thing. It also gives you a code so you can go on the internet, type in your code and might win a prize. Think about it spend $1.57 on a Diet Coke and could win a plasma or some money.

So next time your thirsty and don’t want any of that sugar or caffeine but a Diet Coke.


Brayan

Narrative Paper: Introduction

It started when I moved in with my aunt’s house because we couldn’t afford to live in our old house. So we moved from Lynwood, California to Norwalk, California. So now that I was living at my aunts house my brother and I hanged out with my cousin a lot. We would get bored and think of things to do like go to the store, park, or to a friends house. We thought of everything we could do. We couldn’t go far because we had no car and we didn’t have a lot of money.

After a while of doing the same thing over and over again we started getting bored. So my cousin told us about this movie theaters a couple blocks away from our house. We went to check it out on a Tuesday night. It turns out Tuesday night the price went down. It was like 3 dollars normal price and Tuesday nights it went to 2 dollars. So we went for a couple times then we wanted some snacks but didn’t have enough money. So one night we went bought the tickets and started walking around to other stores trying to pass time. We went in to the 99-cent store and bough six sodas for a dollar. When we came out the store my brother had taken some candy. So next Tuesday we bought the ticket went to the 99-cent store and toke some candy.

At first when we went back to jack some candy I was scared. I dint know what to do. Every time before we went in the store my bother and cousin would tell me don’t get nervous don’t look suspicious just act normal. So I did but my heart was still pumping like crazy. But after a while, kept doing it every Tuesday. It was like what ever like if the people who work there didn’t even care what we did in that store. It came to a point where we were having competitions to see who can steal the most candy or who can steal the biggest thing. I still have the record between us. I stole the most and the biggest out of both of them. Little kid like 7 years old beating the older kids in what they showed me. It was still a trip because we did it to get what we wanted but then it turned into a game. Most of the candy I didn’t even eat. I ended up throwing it away.

Its weird to have started young. But it has affected me. To me when you start young you keep doing it and when you get older you get worst and keep jacking things. From candy to I pod then later you start breaking into houses. I am not saying I’ve done it or it is happening to me but its were leads to. Then you will get caught possibly get locked up. If your lucky maybe you won’t. it is a habit that you can easily fall into. It has changed me I don’t regret it but. That’s what I did and I learned something. Its not good but if I need something real bad I know how to get it.


Brayan

Narrative Paper: Introduction

No matter how old you are 7, 9, or even 6 years old. If you have the guts to do something like steal from a store, then it’s more likely that your friend or family will always take you to the store when they want something for free. Once you start young it really make a difference. A couple candy bars missing so what. Doing it over and over again. After a while you get use to it. Like if the store just wants you to come in and take stuff for free. That’s what it feels like. It comes to a point to were we have competition to see who can steal the most candies or who can steal the biggest thing from the store. Candies we didn’t even like but its to see who can steal the most. It becomes a habit no matter how old are you your race boy and girl.

Brayan

Covering For Friends

I have taken the fall for some of my friends a couple times. To me it doesn’t matter because I know if they were in that situation they would have done the same thing.

But the way it went down was this guy in school was talking crap about my friend and me. One day I confronted him saying why was he talking crap us. So when I did he told me lets fight. I said all right and started taking off my sweater. After I knocked him out my friends got in the fight and started hitting him too. Then after the fight had ended we left and nothing else happened that day.

Until the next day I went to school I got called in to the principle’s office. They started me asking me questions like why I did and all that. But they got to question of who were the other two people that got in the fight. I said I didn’t know who they were I didn’t get a chance to see there faces. They told me if I didn’t tell them whom it was then I would get sent to another school for the rest of the years. So I still didn’t say any thing and got in trouble for everything that happened to that kid. And my friends stayed in the school like nothing happened. But it happens and I don’t regret it.

Brayan

Signs

I have never had a sign from god. Any thing religious sign I never had. But I do believe in signs. I believe that there are signs or warnings everywhere. In television dreams conversations you have with friends or family members everywhere. It has happen to me a couple times. It was a trip because I didn’t think of it till it was happening. Right in the middle of it then I remember the signs.

One of the times I remember was when I first got locked up. The day before I got locked up I was chilling in my house watching television. The show I was watching is called manswers. And it was talking about how to escape handcuffs. At first I got in to it but then didn’t care. But the next day I got pulled over by the cops and got arrested. On my way to DT I was thinking about that show and that if I had that key to get out the handcuffs I wouldn’t be going to DT.

The second time wasn’t something I saw on the television. It was like a week after I got out of DT. I was on house arrest. But this day I went to kick it with some friends. We were just walking around talking about some of our enemies. Later in the day we ran in to some of our enemies. There was three of them and three of us so we in to a little rumble. Busted my hand and got a bruise but I believe in signs but I see them as warnings to watch out for what you saw or talked about.

Brayan

5 Goals

My first goal is to go for the whole school year with out getting in a fight. This is one of my goals because ever since 6 grade I’ve been getting in fights. Till now its been happening. So I’m going to try to not get into any kind of conflicts or arguments. It is going to be hard. Doing some thing I’ve been doing for a while but I can do it.

My second goal is to get good grades. I haven’t got good grades since 5 grade. And if I start paying attention and go to school and do my assignments I can do better. Part of the reason that I haven’t been getting good grades is because I wouldn’t go. And if I did I wouldn’t pay attention or just walk the halls looking for some thing to do. But I’m going to start going to school and stop messing around.

My third goal is to go home. Being in a propter home sucks. I can do nothing up here. It is boring and the worst I’m not with the family and my friends. It still feels weird sleeping in other people home. But what I’m going to do is keep doing what I’m doing now. Because what I’m doing now is working. I get home visits and a little more privileges. So I’m really trying to get this goal.

The fourth goal is to stay out of detention. For some people it takes them like 9 times to go to detention and say they don’t like it. It took me two times and I would be mad if I went back. Any kind of lock up facilities I hate. It can have a different name but they all the same. So I’m not going back no matter what. So I’ll just be careful on what I do and where I am so won’t go back again.

My last goal is to graduate and walk with my class. In my family only like 2 people have graduated. And I want to graduate so I can do good and get some money in my pocket. If I graduate I bet my parents would be proud. To go threw all this and still make yeah they be proud. Even I’ll be proud and surprise. But to do this I just got to do my first goal. This is my most important goal.

Brayan