Well in the story I think that Laura is a shy girl that just needs to stick p for herself and let people know how she feels and not be afraid and her mother Amanda needs to understand how Laura is feeling that she’s not confident with herself and should help her with that and I also think that Amanda should be a lot nicer to tom because in this case he is the provider for the family.

I’m so desperate I search, trying to find myself I look,
I search and I search my heart is lost.
Who’s that I’m looking in the mirror? It’s me,
Its me I’m looking at, me that wont succeed,
I shake my head at what I made me,
I fight to not listen at the pain Iv created,
The pain I will always see
Trembling legs week arm, scars from defeat,
Who am I. What have I become?
My choices are what made me,
and I am what I want to be,
and I still have a chance to defeat me.


-Andrea