Hay what’s up my name Kenny and this my story about energy drinks. What do you think about energy drink. I think that energy drinks are awesome and everyone should drink them. When I drink energy drinks I get very energized, hyper, and fill like doing a lot of stuff.
I think there is special times for energy drink, I don’t think energy drinks are for any time. Like when you’re really tired in the beginning of the day and you want to stay awake, or if you’re having a very bad day and you need to get energized.
Well here is my story about my energy drink problem. I Kenny was walking from West Valley to my friends house and had a total energy meltdown. So I actually was addicted to energy drinks and needed one very badly, so I went around the stores and asked for money. I felt like I was very poor so I just went to my friends with a crave of a energy drink, so I told him that I needed a energy drink and he bought me nice, ice cold venom and I chugged it down like I would with a forty. So guess what happened when I got to drink that energy drink I like exploded with energy.
Kenny
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4 comments:
1. Energy drinks.
2. To wake you up in the morning, can't find second or third reason.
3. I think you can improve by placing more reason.
I would have to agree about the certain times to drink them. The thing with them is you crash really hard after just a little short time after your hyper.
-Kesha :)
I think energy drinks are awesome too. I drink at least 2 energy drinks a day to keep me awake and from falling asleep in class. I drink one in the morning and one after school because they are so good. I also drink only the healthiest kind- Efusjon.
I like how you chose a topic that you are passionate about. The evidence you used about how the energy drinks affect you, and how you think your addicted is very good but more details about how they affect you would help strengthen what you are saying. I also like how you said there are certain times for energy drinks becuase there are, and you explained those times well.
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