MCDONALDS IS KILLING YOU
Don’t you realize how much fat and oil is in just one of their Big Macs. It’s sick. That’s why you should eat Subway instead. Subway is going to make you healthy. Their food tastes good. These are some of the reasons why Subway is good and McDonalds is bad.
Subway is way better than McDonalds. It’s not even a competition between the two. Subway is healthier than them too. There food is not as fatty or oily. It also has less calories. For example one Big Mac has over 450 calories, Subway has less than half. So it helps you lose weight, eat healthy and enjoy life. Like that guy Jared, he lost of fat by eating Subway.
Subway is also cleaner than McDonalds. Their store is more sanitary. They wear gloves and you watch them make your sandwich. You know they don’t spit in your food or do something to mess it up. So you know that your food is good
The food is fresh too. They have actually made the food when you order it. Its not just sitting in a freezer in the back. They got fresh toppings and vegetables. All of these reasons is what makes Subway the better choice.
So pretty much, McDonalds is evil. They are trying to kill you. Don’t fall into the trap. Save yourself from obesity while you still can. Eat subway. They are going to help you. There are countless reasons why subway is better
Josh
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6 comments:
that is too true mickey dee's is killing all of America, its terrible.
I agree. subway is soooo much better for you than McDonalds. nice post.
Mike F.
From what I read, your mail 3 points are: first, Subway is healthier than McDonald. Second, Subway is cleaner than McDonald. Third, Subway's food isn't sitting in a freezer the way McDonald's food is, it's up front where everyone can see how it's made. I would agree with the points you made. I would much rather have Subway than McDonald. some things don't compare.
Josh,
I really enjoyed your commentary on the evil empire "McDonalds". Your persuasive essay is very well organized with a thesis and paragraphs to back up your claim. Might I suggest, that when writing an academic paper you stay away from referring to the audience as "YOU" you can easily still address thee audience without singling them out. Otherwise you have a great paper.
Fast food is sick when you think about it. I would much rather prefer a good home cooked meal by a person i know who is cooking it.
Karissa
yeah i believe what your saying because mc donalds is nothing but fat and all that fat will end our lives quick and i love life so we need to control what we eat and not get obeise
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